Thanks for your HOMEWORK (uncountable noun), Teresa! Great work!
I would strongly suggest that you always read through your work a couple of times once you've finished so that you can check everything. There are a few errors that I KNOW you would have noticed if you'd read back through your work. For example, spelling mistakes: LEANED instead of LEARNED and DENIE instead of DENY.
SELF-ISOLATION means that you 'VOLUNTARILY' stay away from others (you needed to use an adverb rather than an adjective).
You often omit 'IT': 'in the second case, is another person....' = in the second case, IT is another person.
After 'TO GET USED TO' remember that we use the '-ING' form of the verb. We can say AT NIGHT or IN THE EVENING.
Use a collocation dictionary to help you - check which verbs can collocate with 'SITUATION'.
As I said, I'm sure that 90% of your mistakes are due to the fact that you didn't have a quick look through your work. I really enjoyed reading your lockdown diary and I'm glad to hear that you are hopeful and positive. Thanks for sharing!
I would strongly suggest that you always read through your work a couple of times once you've finished so that you can check everything. There are a few errors that I KNOW you would have noticed if you'd read back through your work. For example, spelling mistakes: LEANED instead of LEARNED and DENIE instead of DENY.
SELF-ISOLATION means that you 'VOLUNTARILY' stay away from others (you needed to use an adverb rather than an adjective).
You often omit 'IT': 'in the second case, is another person....' = in the second case, IT is another person.
After 'TO GET USED TO' remember that we use the '-ING' form of the verb. We can say AT NIGHT or IN THE EVENING.
Use a collocation dictionary to help you - check which verbs can collocate with 'SITUATION'.
As I said, I'm sure that 90% of your mistakes are due to the fact that you didn't have a quick look through your work. I really enjoyed reading your lockdown diary and I'm glad to hear that you are hopeful and positive. Thanks for sharing!